Talk:Lazio, Italy

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Hi, I notice you have some very good information; however, you will need much more in order to fulfill the 750 word requirement(Norobello (talk) 13:47, 4 April 2017 (UTC)).

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Hello, I have noticed that your article was written more like a brochure than an actual wiki article (or a research paper for that matter). I see that you have a lot of information that can be useful to readers when they are reading about Lazio, Italy, but when I read it, it just sounded like a brochure for tourists. Also, I noticed lots of original research, which doesn't translate well for a wikipedia article or a research paper. If I were to edit this, I would do the following:

The vocabulary that you used is easy to read, so as long as you keep it that way, you should not have any problems with editing. Just make sure you are writing in your own words and keep it up!Sidneyt512 (talk) 12:41, 12 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Merge the Hot Spots and Landmarks segments together. They mean similar things and having two segments here is unnecessary.
 * Make the language on the page more informational rather than like a brochure. It is a bad idea to have a wikipedia page that sounds like a promotion.
 * Be more specific in the cuisine section. It appears unappealing and needs more information for clarity.
 * The Lead section is more appropriate for the Outdoor Activities section than as the actual lead. I completely redo it, adding information on where it is located and what sets it apart from other areas of Italy.