Talk:Lead(II) oxalate

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Hi- This page looks really good. It has good formatting and a lot of information that's clearly organized. Just one little note of maybe moving the fact that this compound has another name from the Properties section to the general section above your table of contents. Otherwise, good work.

(Ann Lucenko (talk) 21:34, 1 November 2012 (UTC))

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Hi- In the properties section you tell about the other names your compound has. This should not be located here. You could pull that sentence out and put it under your first section "Lead (II) Oxalate" instead. Another thing- on my critique from the react staff, they told me to take out the treatments of the hazards and I see you added treatments into your chembox. Besides that, maybe try to find a picture of the compound after it has undergone its formation reaction- both pictures appear to be when the Pb2+ is not yet bonded to the molecule. Your page is very well organized and has plenty of information. Good job. (Ryanhan2 (talk) 21:36, 1 November 2012 (UTC))