Talk:League of Legends All-Star (version 2)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 8 January 2019 and 28 March 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Wusauying.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:59, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Feedback on article draft
Hi, it's nice to see the progress you've made so far, and I'm really looking forward to seeing what other content you can add.

The others left you good feedback already, and you should take their advice. But I want to emphasize again that right now the most important thing you need to do to improve your article is to find some reliable sources for the information you want to add. Gamepedia is a user-generated content site (another wiki) andleagueoflegends.com is a primary source. You need to find coverage of the event in a reliable secondary source (maybe a gaming magazine or review site). If you don't have any reliable secondary sources for the content then there's a chance that your article may get deleted when you publish it.

I'm happy to give you more feedback when you're further along, just {ping | Groceryheist} at me Groceryheist (talk) 01:31, 6 February 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi, this is a really interesting topic! I think your article so far is informative and neutral. I like the way that you present your facts. However, I would encourage you to draw from sources other than LoL itself. What are people/sources saying about it and why is it relevant? I really like what you are doing with the chart and can’t wait to see the finished product. Be sure to cite your sources in the text, for some reason I don’t see any embedded but see them at the bottom? Best of luck and keep up the good work! Emileehelm (talk) 23:32, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

Kanraru(Jay Cho)'s Peer Feedback
I like how you've started on the article, and thinking of putting that table for all All-stars that's happened so far. If you haven't already, I recommend kind of looking to NBA All-Star Game for the structure- writing LoL All Stars' history, features, than going down the tables. There's plenty of sources to pull from, but try to keep the neutral language you already have! Good luck! Kanraru (talk) 05:08, 2 February 2019 (UTC)