Talk:League of Nations (professional wrestling)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:11, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Shall be conducting this review as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 12:11, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Irishman, Mexican, Bulgarian, Englishman and United States should generally not be linked per MOS:OVERLINK
 * "and come together to proudly represent their respective nations" - banded
 * "The faction primarily feuded with Roman Reigns and was poorly received by critics." - perhaps it would help to briefly state why critics disliked the group
 * Thanks for taking this on! I've just started these fixes but will be on and off here throughout the day.LM2000 (talk) 17:08, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

History

 * Delink United States per MOS:OVERLINK
 * "individual members of The League of Nations also feuded individually with other wrestlers during this period," - try to avoid close repetition of similarly spelled wording such as the one highlighted in bold
 * "Both of these rivalries culminated in matches at TLC: Tables, Ladders & Chairs, where all of the League members successful in their separate singles matches" - repetition of the word "matches"
 * "Sheamus' WWE World Heavyweight Championship run ended the following night on Raw when he lost the championship back to Reigns," - how about changing the word in bold to "title" to avoid repetition of the same word in the same sentence
 * "Del Rio and Rusev were defeated by Big E and Woods in another title match, prompting all four members of The League to attack The New Day after the match." - same issue as above
 * "Their feud with The Wyatt Family was cut short because Bray Wyatt suffered a legitimate injury." - maybe add the event on which Bray Wyatt sustained his injury
 * "Del Rio also confirmed in an interview that the group was finished," - was disbanded,
 * Done. For the record, the source I used for Wyatt's injury did not credit an author.LM2000 (talk) 21:55, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Reception

 * "Pro Wrestling Dot Net writer Haydn Gleed criticized how WWE wasted the four men's combined potential" - more formal; squandered
 * "In an interview shortly after his departure from the company," - you mean he left WWE?
 * "caused Alberto Del Rio's stock to drop" - avoid using idioms per MOS:IDIOM and rewrite it so that it is more formal