Talk:Leanna Cavanagh/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:12, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * The use of "young age" in the second paragraph of the lead feels repetitive.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "her mother died at a young age" - was her mother young when she died or did she die when Leanna was young? Clarify.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "as a troublemaker".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "reconcile".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "time off from school".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "the party".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "situation to Liam".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "have been" "had been"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Recite references at the end of each quote per WP:QUOTE.
 * Are there particular places where sentences with quote(s) aren't recited? I can't see any; I can see a bunch of sentences that use multiple quotes but they are derived from the same cite at the end of the sentence? – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 * After "[her] remark" and for "floods of hate" in #Reception.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 20:50, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ now! That's the section I wrote prior to learning of WP:QUOTE LOL. – DarkGlow • 20:54, 31 March 2021 (UTC)


 * References are archived.
 * Websites are linked.
 * Everything else looks good.
 * Thank you! – DarkGlow • 20:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)