Talk:Leatherhead/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 00:06, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

I should have this finished in a day or two. I'm not sure if I've been to Leatherhead but I can't imagine its High Street being worse than some that I can think of in Hampshire! ♦ jaguar  00:06, 30 November 2021 (UTC)


 * "Leatherhead was primarily an agricultural settlement and a weekly market was held until the mid-Elizabethan era" - would read better as Leatherhead was primarily an agricultural settlement with a weekly market being held until the mid-Elizabethan era
 * Done. Rephrased as requested. Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
 * "Excavations of the manor house site (now known as The Mounts) in the mid-20th century, provided" - unnecessary comma
 * Done. Comma removed. Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
 * "New housing developments were built in Fairfield, Highlands and Kingston Roads, and Queen Anne's Garden" - when? In 1911?
 * Done. Added date range. Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
 * "In 2021, The local police force is Surrey Police" - necessary capital letter
 * Done. Replaced uppercase "T" with a lowercase "t". Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
 * "The headquarters of the charity moved to Epsom" - when was this? If not known, rephrase to 'since moved'
 * Done. I cannot find a date for the move, so I have rephrased the sentence as requested. Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
 * "Eric Idle, in Native American costume says" - Eric Idle can be linked
 * Done. Wiki link added as requested. Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)

That's all I have. This is well-written, comprehensive and well sourced. I couldn't find much to point out, as evidenced by the short review. Sorry about that. On hold. ♦ jaguar  00:03, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi Thanks very much for your comments. I have made the changes that you have requested. Best wishes Mertbiol (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you, another Surrey GA! ♦  jaguar  12:21, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much for your review and for promoting this article so quickly. Thanks also to  for their input in the later stages of preparing for nomination. Best wishes Mertbiol (talk) 12:38, 4 December 2021 (UTC)