Talk:Leave It All to Me/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:39, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

Quite a short article, which I will measure against the GA criteria today. --K. Peake 07:39, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Remove venue parameter from the infobox because that is for live recordings
 * Separate the labels using bullet points instead
 * Target Michael Corcoran to Michael Corcoran (musician)
 * Move audio sample to being in the opening section, aligned to the left
 * Kyle Peake what do you mean by this? The Ultimate Boss (talk) 09:44, 18 February 2021 (UTC)


 * "is the debut single by American actress and singer Miranda Cosgrove featuring Drake Bell." → "is a song by American actress and singer Miranda Cosgrove, featuring Drake Bell, from the Nickelodeon show iCarly's soundtrack album of the same name (2008)." with the wikilinks and target – this is because you are supposed to introduce what album(s) a song is on in the first sentence of the lead
 * "It was written" → "The song was written"
 * Swap the pop song and lead single sentences
 * Target theme song to Theme music
 * "for the Nickelodeon show iCarly." → "for the show."
 * "for soundtrack album of the same name" → "from the album" and maybe mention at the end "standing as Cosgrove's debut release."
 * Swap the music video and Hot 100 position for correct order
 * Wikilink music video
 * "uploaded to Cosgroves" → "uploaded to Cosgrove's"
 * "The single debuted and peaked at" → "The song peaked at"
 * "giving Cosgrove and Bell" → "giving both Cosgrove and Bell"
 * "performed the track during" → "performed "Leave It All to Me" during"
 * "her Dancing Crazy Tour in 2011." → "her debut sold tour the Dancing Crazy Tour in 2011."

Background and composition

 * "Miranda Cosgrove was asked by" → "Cosgrove was asked by"
 * Target theme song to Theme music
 * "Cosgrove explained she" → "The singer explained she"
 * "or been a recording studio," → "or been in a recording studio,"
 * "one of Bell's band members." → "one of Drake Bell's band members."
 * "features her former Drake & Josh co-star, Drake Bell." → "features Bell, who co-starred with her in Drake & Josh."
 * The source does not mention the song's genre as being pop
 * There is no info about the comp apart from the above unsourced genre and literally nothing on the lyrics; can you try and add something?

Release and reception

 * Wikilink lead single
 * Remove wikilink on soundtrack album
 * "iCarly by Nickelodeon Records and Columbia Records." → "iCarly, through Nickelodeon and Columbia Records."
 * "list' saying: "the" → "list, saying that "the"
 * "giving Cosgrove and Bell" → "giving both Cosgrove and Bell"
 * [9] is useless, as that offers no mention of the song's Hot 100 position

Promotion and impact

 * Wikilink music video
 * "was later released on" → "was later released to"
 * "headlining 2011 concert tour" → "headlining 2011 concert tour the"
 * "the song at Cosgrove's performance at Club Nokia." → "the song at Club Nokia, with his appearance gathering cheers from the crowd." since this part is mentioned by the source but is missing for some reason
 * "it had been six years since Cosgrove released her extended play, High Maintenance," → "it had been around six years since Cosgrove released her second extended play High Maintenance,"
 * "In April of the same year," → "In April 2017,"
 * "had stated in the past that she" → "revealed that she"
 * Target lip-syncing to Lip sync

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Charts

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed, but I am not too sure about the article's notability though this will become clearer after your response. --K. Peake 08:37, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Done! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 09:44, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
 * With the comment about the audio sample, I meant it should be in the background and composition section on the left. Also, you could definitely do with adding a mention of the lyrics to the lead. --K. Peake 10:14, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
 * added. How does the article look now? The Ultimate Boss (talk) 10:26, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I copy edited slightly, but it looks good apart from no text on the audio sample detailing the lyrical content; add this since it is sourced in prose, as well as the length of the snippet. --K. Peake 10:30, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
 * how does it look now? The Ultimate Boss (talk) 10:34, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅, sample text looks good now! --K. Peake 10:34, 18 February 2021 (UTC)