Talk:Leavin' (album)/GA1

GA Review
Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 23:48, 01 April 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 23:48, 01 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much! This will be an interesting review as I literally made this page so hopefully I did it all correctly lol. Aoba47 (talk) 00:29, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

Infobox
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 * Remove the quotation marks around "Day Dreaming" in the singles box; they are pre-included without having to manually add them

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 * Include the year after Ask a Woman Who Knows.

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 * "Upon its release" → "After its release'

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 * I would move this paragraph to the one above, creating a slightly larger one :)

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 * Looks really good!
 * Thank you!

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 * Hmmm. I particularly don't like album covers used in sections; is there a different image that could be used in place of this previous album cover? If not, it'll just have to do.
 * I will look for a different image. I agree with your point. Aoba47 (talk) 06:02, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
 * ✅ (The image is pretty blurry, but it is hard to find an image that is both high quality/appropriate and that will not be taken down immediately.)


 * The period should come before the quotation marks in the last sentence, right?
 * I was told that the punctuation comes after the quotation marks unless citing a full sentence. I thought it was odd too as it is not like that for normal writing, but I was directed to this during the c/e. Aoba47 (talk) 06:02, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

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 * Link 'Dallas Austin'
 * Otherwise, good work
 * Thank you!

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 * "yet up-to-date". Taylor described..." → "yet up-to-date"; Taylor described..."
 * Nothing else to mention
 * Thank you!

Composition

 * Highly impressed with this section; zero comments whatsoever!
 * Thank you! It took a lot of work for this section!

Promotion

 * Another comment; is there a different image of maybe Cole singing live or something? The music video pic is alright, but an image of Cole performing one of the album's songs would be even better!
 * I will look around for a different image. Thank for you for the suggestion! Aoba47 (talk) 06:02, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Since Cole did not promote the album a lot, there are unfortunately only a handful of times that I could find a video of her performing the songs live and I am not certain if taking screenshots of any of those would help the article as they are very pixelated/blurry. Aoba47 (talk) 14:15, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

Critical response
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 * Change the first sentence to "Leavin' received positive reviews from music critics."

Track listing

 * Are the producers available for the tracks? You could try discogs.com perhaps?
 * Thank you for bringing my attention to this. Will add this.
 * Could you add who produced the only non-Austin produced track in the short statement above the track listing?
 * Will look for it now.
 * Will look for it now.

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 * Shouldn't the No. for the bonus track be #13.?

Credits
✅ Sorry for the mistake here ><
 * This may be a little putzy, but shouldn't the additional positions/instruments after the first one be all lowercased? Like for Dallas Austin for example: "Composer, drums, executive producer, horn arrangements, percussion, performer, producer, rhythm arrangements, vocal arrangement" Do you see what I mean?

Charts
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 * Remove 'Weekly charts' since it didn't end up on a 'year-end chart'

Release history
✅ Wow, that was a silly mistake lol
 * The dates need to be in chronological order; 2010 comes before 2006 in this example

End of GA Review:
A very strong article again! Just some few changes and I'm sure it will pass. Thanks again! Carbrera (talk) 03:54, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much for the link. I will have the two new images uploaded in a couple hours as I about to go to bed now. I have addressed your other points so I should be finished soon. This is really awesome to get positive and constructive feedback on an article that I have created and expanded on my own. Aoba47 (talk) 06:39, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Glad I could help! Have you completed your changes to the article? Carbrera (talk) 14:10, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you! I have completed my changes to the article and left my comments above. Let me know if there is anything else I can do. Aoba47 (talk) 14:15, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 14:45, 2 April 2016 (UTC)