Talk:Leaving Fishers

Grammar, citation, length problems
There are a variety of grammar issues with the character descriptions section (some pretty atrocious ones like "more better"). I fixed some of them but perhaps this should be tagged for grammar. The article also fails to cite any references or sources. As this is a rather thought-provoking book I think this entry should be extended longer than the one-paragraph summary and the terse, short character summaries. I tagged this as a stub. Beggarsbanquet (talk) 01:10, 6 May 2008 (UTC)