Talk:Leduc 022/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 22:34, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

Can attend to shortly Eddie891 Talk Work 22:34, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Sources look reliable, prepared to AGF
 * Is it standard to capitalize "throughout the Fifties " ?
 * Yes, unless you're using the digits instead.
 * It's not immediately clear to me what "Intended for service use," service refers to here-- remember that all work in the armed services can be called "service"
 * I don't understand "and a time to 25,000 metres (82,000 ft) of only seven minutes." -- if it's just me being dull, feel free to explain here instead of in the article
 * See if my change makes it any clearer
 * Any information on the cost of the prototype?
 * Is it really worth putting the sentence under 'Surviving aircraft' as a bullet point?
 * MOS:ELLAYOUT recommends accompanying an entry in the 'external links' section with a brief description if it isn't clear what it is
 * Indeed it does.
 * That's anything from me Eddie891 Talk Work 01:18, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking the time to review it, see if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:47, 29 March 2021 (UTC)
 * --Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 31 March 2021 (UTC)