Talk:Lee Jeong-hyang

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Snowydaze. Peer reviewers: KS531.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 00:01, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

FMST329: Peer review
Hi Snowydaze!

Love your article, it's a great start! I have nothing much to say except maybe some minor suggestions:

- An infobox with her general information gathered into one place.

- If possible, more information about her personal life in order for the reader to get a sense of who she is (as a person and writer).

- 'life and career' as two distinct sections (ex. 'career' and 'personal life')

- Her general achievements and/or works, in the introduction

Little correction: *Born in South Korea

Aside from that, love your writing and wording. Thank you for the good read and good luck with your assignment!

--KS531 (talk) 03:13, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review 2
I enjoyed this article very much, I like how concise you are. There is a little grammatical error when you say "Born in South Korean". I'd also like a little more contextual information about the government censorship that afflicted Lee. Beyond that, I think some citations for the claim that her second film is "undoubtedly her most successful and critically acclaimed to date." But I really enjoyed this article and think it was really well done.

TurinHorse2011 (talk) 22:07, 17 March 2016 (UTC)