Talk:Lee Joannes/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 14:00, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this one, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 14:00, 2 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks . Appreciate the review! « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 14:28, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

Initial review

Infobox

 * Could do with a reference for his full name as I can't see it referenced in the main text anywhere.

Personal life

 * The sentence "Joannes remarried in 1972 to Delia Joannes" makes it sound like her name was Joannes already and he married a family member.

In all honesty, I'm having difficulty in finding anything really to complain about! Two minor issues above perhaps, so placed on hold until these are addressed. Kosack (talk) 19:59, 2 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks . I believe both comments have been addressed. His full name can be found in the Packers.com ref, and I have removed Delia's name from the article (her maiden name isn't in any references). « Gonzo fan2007   (talk)  @ 20:48, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

Happy to promote this. Well written, suitably referenced and no copyvio concerns. Nice work. Kosack (talk) 20:52, 2 May 2019 (UTC)