Talk:Lee Weigel/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:30, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:30, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 20:30, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Missing a period at the end of the lead.
 * Added.
 * NAIA should be spelled out for its first use.
 * Done.
 * in a scrimmage against the Los Angeles Raiders. does this mean a preseason game? If so, just say that.
 * It doesn't sound like it was a preseason game (which, if I remember correctly, took place in August rather than July) - looking at this report, it seems like it was some kind of exhibition / practice at the Raiders training complex between rookie players of the two teams? What would you suggest?
 * NFLPA should be spelled out.
 * Done.
 * Ref spot check: #4, 9, 10, 15, 17, 20
 * Responded to each of your points. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:49, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good. I amfine with scrimmage. Passed. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 20:57, 18 October 2023 (UTC)