Talk:Lefebvre's Charles Town expedition/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 18:17, 25 August 2012 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * This is awkward: A brief encounter with a privateer separated the Brillant, one of the expedition's six ships. As is this: On September 11 Lieutenant Colonel Rhett sailed the colonial flotilla out to find the invaders, but found they had sailed off. Clarify this: They also mobilized Indian forces to attack Mobile, but these efforts were frustrated in part by French diplomacy and false rumors of another Franco-Spanish expedition. Was it the combination of French diplomacy and false rumors that frustrated the planned attack? Rephrased all of these.  Magic ♪piano 12:35, 4 September 2012 (UTC)
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Add state of publication for all those that don't have it, and need place of publication for Marley, which should also be listed alphabetically in the References section. Done  Magic ♪piano 12:35, 4 September 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
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 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
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 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
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