Talk:Left Alive/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Namcokid47 (talk · contribs) 02:35, 5 July 2020 (UTC)

Immediately failing this GAN due to a multitude of issues present. These are my thoughts: There's simply way too many issues present here for it to be a GA. It needs a lot of work before it can be nominated, and will possibly need a total rewrite/major copyedit. Namcokid 47  (Contribs) 02:35, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) Messy writing in many places, such as a repetition of words (the development section is chock full of these), sentences that aren't tied to other paragraphs, and paragraphs that provide very little information to the reader in a clear way (ex. "Players spend most of their time trying to evade enemies and create improvised weapons when stealth fails or is not an option.")
 * 2) Why is there a screenshot that shows the glitches? Why does that need to have a visual representation? Having a screenshot depicting the actual gameplay is what should be here.
 * 3) Inappropriate word choices in areas, such as "badly done game physics" and "His personality began as conceited, like one who had an affluent childhood, but as his dialogue made him a more “honest and earnest”, his design changed again."
 * 4) The reception is way, way too short. There's two paragraphs, one of which isn't even talking about the game itself. What's present here is not good either, like: "They also noted “laughable” enemy physics, where killed enemies bodies would jump in the air however they died."
 * 5) Lots of sentences lack commas, proper grammar, or basic punctuation.
 * 6) References are inconsistent with dates, with some using "Year Month Day" and others using "Day Month Year"