Talk:Legend Entertainment/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:01, 6 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's it for a quick first review. On hold for now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 19:42, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Lead says "computer games" infobox says "video games", any good reason they're not the same?
 * "	1989[1]" ref not needed in the infobox as it's referenced in the article.
 * Any reason TIMEQUEST is in caps? the article doesn't treat it that way.
 * "based on the novel" eponymous novel?
 * " rising without a similar rise in" avoid repeat, maybe "similar increase in"?
 * " Bob Bates and Mike Verdu.[7] Bates and Verdu" repetitive, perhaps " Bob Bates and Mike Verdu.[7] The duo..." or similar.
 * "r Infocom.[6] a leader" probably should be a comma, not a full stop.
 * "after years of rising costs" it makes it sound like an age, but it was three years.
 * "Activision ultimately closed Infocom" is ultimately adding anything here?
 * No need to link common words like "author".
 * No need to repeat people's first names if there's no ambiguity after the first use.
 * No need to link common words like "novel".
 * Don't use hash (#) to mean "number" per MOS.
 * "Computer Gaming World's " 's shouldn't be in italics. And use  to stop the apostrophe crashing into the last "d".
 * LucasArts is overlinked.
 * "publisher Random House,[14][12]" order.
 * " a blessing and a curse" not really encyclopedic in tone, is it a quote?
 * "compact disc" is overlinked.
 * "The Wheel of Time in 1999, a first-person action game" all three overlinked.
 * No need to link New York or France.
 * All the spaced hyphens in the table (e.g. "... World - Adventure...") should be en-dashes.
 * Table needs a caption, row and col scopes for accessibility.
 * Online refs should have at least one of publication date and access date.
 * Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles.
 * "Bytes - Issue" should be an en-dash, not a hyphen, check others.
 * The defunct date (infobox) and defunct category (2004) don't appear in the prose nor referenced.

Thanks a lot for the review and suggestions. I incorporated all of them. I also gave a good look over the ref section and the table for formatting. Let me know if I missed anything. I can keep chipping away. Shooterwalker (talk) 02:13, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
 * No, I think it's all good. I made a couple of minor  tweaks but I'm happy  this passes GA.  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:32, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much. Shooterwalker (talk) 16:01, 8 March 2021 (UTC)