Talk:Legolas/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 23:38, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:25, 4 June 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose

2. Verifiability

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
1.
 * Isn't Elves a proper noun in Tolkien's writings? I think all instances of Elf, Elves, or Elvish should probably be capitalized then, although I may be wrong.
 * Done.


 * Hollin can be linked to the Geography of Middle-earth article.
 * Done.


 * "Legolas helped fend off an attack by Saruman's wolves" - Maybe this is a little crufty and nitpicky, but weren't they technically wargs?
 * Done, and linked.


 * Link the first instance of dwarf to Dwarf (Middle-earth)
 * Done.


 * Link Saruman at the first mention, not the second
 * Done.


 * I think Orcs should be capitalized, as it's technically a proper noun in-universe
 * Done.


 * Silvan Elves is a duplink
 * Fixed.


 * Nazgul is a duplink
 * Fixed.


 * Rivendell is a duplink
 * Fixed.

2.
 * IMDB is user-generated and is not a reliable source
 * Replaced.


 * "Legolas is absent from the 1980 animated version of The Return of the King, but was voiced by David Collings in the 1981 BBC Radio 4 adaptation.[7]" - The bit about the 1980 film doesn't seem to be in the ref.
 * Removed.


 * Normally blogspot isn't a great ref, but the author, Brian Sibley, seems to be a well-qualified person, if Brian Sibley is the same person.
 * Yes, it's him, and he's authorlinked.


 * Ref 11 is flagging some sort of formatting error, not sure what the issue is.
 * Fixed.


 * The proper nouns in here would be: Elf, Elves, Elvish, any names, Dwarf (s), King, Queen (Followed by a name, otherwise it is not proper.)  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2603:6010:8F0E:3A3F:20FE:A4D0:AB49:79BF (talk) 13:24, 21 December 2020 (UTC)

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Placing on hold, just a few issues to deal with. Good work. I've made a couple tweaks to the infobox, you might want to look over those. Hog Farm (talk) 00:06, 5 June 2020 (UTC)