Talk:Leigh Diffey/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:44, 18 January 2018 (UTC)

As promised I'll take a look at Diffey's article. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 15:44, 18 January 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Delink United States, United Kingdom and Australia in the lead prose and infobox per MOS:OVERLINK

Early career: Network Ten and BBC

 * Wikilink Ipswich Grammar School
 * "He worked alongside Steve Parrish and Suzi Perry." - for whom?
 * "He also covered the 12 Hours of Sebring." When did Diffey cover the Sebring 12 Hours?

2003–2012: Speed Channel and return to Network Ten

 * Add a link to AMA Motocross Championships

Formula One and IndyCar

 * Remove the wikilink to SI.com
 * "he called the Belgian Grand Prix from NBC's base in Stamford, Connecticut, before he and Matchett traveled to Pocono Raceway to call the ABC Supply 500." - reptition of "call", also "traveled" must be spelt as travelled since you've put an Australian English tag in the article
 * "Diffey called the Italian Grand Prix in Connecticut and then traveled to" - travelled again

NASCAR

 * "covering the Xfinity Series at Mid-Ohio Sports Car Course" - The acroymns of the Xfinity Series are needed in parentheses

Global rallycross

 * "doing play-by-play for the 2017 season's final event" - try round in place of "event"

Overall you've written a fine piece of work Ben. Nothing much from me. MWright96 (talk) 21:05, 18 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Done everything; the action has been brought! Many thanks, --Bcschneider53 (talk) 02:34, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Alright, can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:06, 19 January 2018 (UTC)