Talk:Leleiohoku II/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:15, 1 August 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  17:15, 1 August 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a   ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a   ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a   ✅
 * 6.b   ✅
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅
 * No missing citations   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
 * Some of his other classmates included Samuel Nowlein and Robert Hoapili Baker, both of whom were politicians in later life suggest:
 * Some of his other classmates included Samuel Nowlein and Robert Hoapili Baker, who both became politicians later in their lives.
 * American and British troops were landed with the permission of the Hawaiian government, and the rioters were arrested. may want to mention the source of these troops (presumably a nearby fort).


 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  17:32, 23 August 2018 (UTC)
 * As a side note, would you consider reviewing my FAC nom Tetricus I? Cheers. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  17:35, 23 August 2018 (UTC)