Talk:Lemme See/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomica (talk · contribs) 02:18, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

✅ Removed and replaced reference.
 * There are not disambiguation links, however reference number 7 is dead. — Tomíca (T2ME) 13:46, 24 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * Looks good. — Tomíca (T2ME) 13:48, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

✅ I think the current wording sounds a bit better. ✅ ✅
 * Lead
 * "Lemme See" is a song by American recording artist Usher, released on RCA Records, ---> "Lemme See" is a song by American recording artist Usher, released through RCA Records, — Tomíca (T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * The track features vocals from rapper, Rick Ross. ---> The track features rapper verses from rapper, Rick Ross. — Tomíca (T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * It was released as a digital download on May 4, 2012, ---> It was digitally released on May 4, 2012, — Tomíca (T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * You can add some info about the live performances in the lead.— Tomíca (T2ME) 13:53, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

✅
 * Background and release
 * "Lemme See" was released as a digital download on May 4, 2012 ---> Same as lead. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

✅ ✅ ✅
 * Composition and critical reception
 * "Lemme See" is a mid-tempo R&B song that makes heavy use of synthesizers, ---> "Lemme See" is a mid-tempo R&B song that heavily incorporates synthesizers, — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * [15][1][16][9] ---> Bad order of references, it should be chronologically, by numbers. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * "Lemme See" received universally positive acclaim from ---> i think it's too biased to say universally, maybe just positive acclaim? — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:01, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

✅ ✅ Removed. ✅ Removed.
 * Chart performance
 * It was knocked off the chart the proceeding week. ---> Sourced it please. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * and is currently charted at number 71. ---> This needs clarifying. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Currently, "Lemme See" is charted at number twelve on the latter chart. ---> Same as above. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:06, 24 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Music video and live performances --->
 * C/e it. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:17, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

Cool
 * Track listing
 * Good now. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Charts
 * Looks good. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Release history
 * Good. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ ✅ Used Web and News template where appropriate; better formatted AllMusic ref. ✅ ✅ ✅ Should be good now.
 * References
 * Ref 1. Misses author. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref 4. Link publisher. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref 5. Same as above. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref 6. Same. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref 11. Link publisher. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref 14. Publisher should be in brackets or cite news — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref 16. Same as above, just the The Guardian should be work and italicize. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref 21. Same as 14. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * I see you are not using the cite web and the one for news, if you don't use them try to format the references well. Bad example: Youssef, Sobhi. Review: Looking 4 Myself Sputnik Music. Retrieved on 2012-06-18.
 * There is inconsistency in the dates and accessdates. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Some references miss accessdate. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * All in all the references are mess. Work on them! — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)


 * External links
 * It's good. — Tomíca (T2ME) 14:27, 24 November 2012 (UTC)

Thanks Tom, i'll address these issues hopefully later today.  Et 3  rnal  16:50, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Take your time buddy. — Tomíca (T2ME) 17:15, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * I think I've addressed all the issues.  Et 3  rnal  02:14, 25 November 2012 (UTC)