Talk:Leo Fortune-West/GA1

GA Review
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--  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:28, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

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 * 1A
 * By spells I am referring to a period being spent at a club, but I've reworded it.
 * "His first season at Gillingham..." - reworded.
 * "The 1999–2000 saw Fortune-West..." - reworded. Although, I'm unsure what's wrong with "He featured for Cardiff in the..."
 * What I did mean was to fix the intro. of the sentence, "The 1999-2000"... since it had a weird sound to it.
 * I see, "season" was omitted. Added now. Mattythewhite (talk) 17:49, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Check.
 * "His first season with the club..." - reworded, but I think it makes sense either way.


 * 1B
 * Links - removed overlinkage.
 * "His Shrewsbury debut came..." - removed repetition.
 * Check.


 * 6
 * There is another image available at Wikimedia Commons, but it only shows him during the same match as the other two images and would seem a bit pointless to include I'd say.
 * I was just wondering, cause you could barely seem him, but its fine.

Cheers, Mattythewhite (talk) 17:19, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you to Mattythewhite, who was Casper at first, for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 19:11, 15 January 2009 (UTC)