Talk:Leon Gast

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Hey There!

I just read your article on Leon Gast and I think that you have a lot of good information. Below are some of my suggestions.

1) Sometimes, there were some sentence run-ons or just some word phrasing that didn't seem like it fit with Wikipedia usually wants. I tried to fix a few of these for you. Just remember that we don't want Wikipedia to sound like a school essay; just state the facts and you should be good here!

2) I felt that in the top parts of the article, there were little to no citations. You don't want the page to get taken down, so be sure to cite as much as possible. I do believe you have the sources (as you seem to cite these pieces of information later on in the article), so this should be a quick fix!

3) You might want to try and condense some of the headers so that you have bigger paragraphs instead of headers with just a few sentences under them. This is just a formatting issue.

4) Did Leon do anything besides cover the fight? A variety of information might help your article to really showcase the life of Gast, past just what he did with the fight.

These are my suggestions! Let me know if you have any questions for me.

Jahanobik2015 (talk) 23:14, 12 November 2015 (UTC)

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Marijuana smuggling
Is it revelant to include a bit about how Gast was arrested and convicted in West Virginia on drug smuggling charges stemming from the crash of a cargo plane laden with 12 tons of marijuana? https://mywvhome.com/seventies/pot.html