Talk:Leon W. Johnson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Auntieruth55 (talk · contribs) 21:31, 2 March 2017 (UTC)


 * I'll get to this over the weekend. auntieruth (talk) 21:31, 2 March 2017 (UTC)


 * First section


 * second sentence is hinky
 * ✅ Fixed after looking up "hinky" in the Wiktionary. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
 * link second lieutenant
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Mitchell Field, New York, (missing comma after NY)
 * ✅ Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)


 * WWII


 * Dab
 * ✅ Disambiguated . Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
 * On 14 May 1943 comma
 * ✅ Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
 * The B-24, carrying incendiaries, came under particularly heavy attack from German fighters, as they were unable to stay close enough the B-17s to be protected by their gunfire, and had to open up their own formation to attack; five of the eight aircraft shot down were B-24s. confusing to an air fighting noob
 * the attack on the Ploesti oil fields in Romania....the attack on the Romanian Ploesti oil fields is possibly more readable
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
 * Andy Rooney knew he was a general before he was a general?
 * Yes, but he didn't like hanging around the bomber outfits, because it was too depressing. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Postwar


 * capitalize air
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)
 * promotion to major general?
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:57, 10 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Nice! Let me know when you get to this.  auntieruth (talk) 23:03, 10 March 2017 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * y
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * nicely done. interesting and concise.  auntieruth (talk) 16:58, 11 March 2017 (UTC)
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * nicely done. interesting and concise.  auntieruth (talk) 16:58, 11 March 2017 (UTC)
 * nicely done. interesting and concise.  auntieruth (talk) 16:58, 11 March 2017 (UTC)