Talk:Leonard Grunstein

Purpose

 * Edits on a BLP need to stick to notable facts. Lot of repetitive and arbitrary info has been added historically. Info also tended to be placed in nauseating order. Page should establish flow. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ClosingCosts (talk • contribs) 15:36, 31 July 2014 (UTC)

Lead

 * Rearranged in order of mention and shortened. As a lead, it should be high level, concise. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ClosingCosts (talk • contribs) 15:36, 31 July 2014 (UTC)

Healthcare

 * Shortened Cammeby’s/Abe/IHS to Grunstein’s direct involvement. Some information contained insignificant details that belong on a company page.
 * Removed unnecessary and redundant info about lawsuit. Case was dismissed. Not notable. Makes more sense to be on a company page.
 * Removed real estate reference, as it’s already in lead.
 * Removed unnecessary details from legal docs. This is not intended to be a summary of the court case. Some of the information was inaccurate and not sourced. Grunstein did not “later” resign from law and it was not part of the plea agreement. Some of the info was also copied and pasted from opposing legal documents, which undoubtedly do not preserve NPOV. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ClosingCosts (talk • contribs) 15:36, 31 July 2014 (UTC)