Talk:Leonis C. Malburg

John Malburg
How relevant is the son's offending to this article to mention it in the lead section? Twice! The lead section uses 2 sentences to say what takes one in the body. What is more it expands on what is said in the body. I would be happy if what appears in the lead were to appear in the body but it is off-topic and confusing in the lead, which is meant to be a summary of the rest of the article. It is almost as if someone was using this article as a way to write an article about Jon Malburg. It makes the lead confusing, too. Or is there a missing part of the story that has not been told in the article? - Cameron Dewe (talk) 00:50, 24 April 2021 (UTC)