Talk:Leonore Annenberg/GA1

GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * The only issue is the sentence "She graduated from Stanford University in 1940 with a Bachelor of Arts degree, and soon married Schenley liquors manager Lewis Rosensteil; they had two children but divorced." This would be best split into two sentences. Otherwise the article is well written. -Fixed
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * Please expand the introduction. You establish the subject well, but the introduction should also give an overview of the content of the article. -fixed
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Hi, thanks for the review. I believe that I have completed the tasks holding this article back from becoming GA. Thanks, Happyme22 (talk) 16:21, 30 June 2008 (UTC)