Talk:Les Hill

Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

Espresso Addict 20:04, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Appropriate infobox should be added
 * Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
 * Basic biographical information required
 * Article needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
 * After expansion, article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
 * References should be added, preferably in the inline format
 * External link present which could be used to expand article

The pacific
He's also in the pacific by Steen spielberg etc. He played a captain on the pendington??? marine base. 81.68.255.36 (talk) 21:07, 26 May 2010 (UTC)