Talk:Lesego Rampolokeng

Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

Espresso Addict 20:23, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Appropriate infobox should be added
 * Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
 * Basic biographical information required, eg education, place of residence
 * Article needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
 * Main body of article after expansion should be divided into appropriate subheadings
 * Information on works should be expanded (eg genre, style, critical reception) and references required
 * References should be added, preferably in the inline format
 * External link present which could be used to expand article