Talk:Lesley Choyce

Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

Espresso Addict 20:48, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Appropriate infobox should be added
 * Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
 * After expansion, article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
 * Information on writings should be expanded (eg genre, style, critical reception) and references required
 * References should be added, preferably in the inline format
 * External link present which could be used to expand article