Talk:Lesley Dunlop

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Did her PR woman write this?--MartinUK 01:13, 6 March 2007 (UTC) lesley I would like to contact you. I am margarita suarez from sevilla(spain)my e-mail address is margasuarezcastell@msn.com 1966

Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

Espresso Addict 20:56, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Appropriate infobox should be added
 * Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
 * Needs some copy editing eg to reduce overly promotional tone in places
 * Some basic biographical information required, eg education, place of residence
 * Article needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
 * Article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
 * List of roles should be included
 * References should be added, preferably in the inline format
 * External link present which could be used to expand article