Talk:Lest We Forget: The Best Of/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 08:04, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

I will review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2  Looking at you, kid 08:04, 3 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * "The deluxe version of the record included bonus DVD" — "included "a" bonus DVD". Add the "a" there.
 * "Commercially, the compilation out-performed expectations in the United States" — Write it as "The compilation's commercial performance exceeded expectations in the United States"
 * "had sold over a million copies by late 2010" — Write it as "had sold over a million copies as of late 2010"
 * "Internationally, it was also successful" — Write it as "It was also successful internationally,".
 * Alt texts are needed for the images.
 * Who's "the band's frontman"? Manson? If so, just write his surname there instead.
 * "includes a DVD of sixteen of the band's music videos" — Write it as "includes a bonus DVD containing sixteen of the band's music videos"

I'll look at the sources tomorrow. — Ssven2  Looking at you, kid 09:19, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall: Passed, my queries were met and solved by the nominator.
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Thank you for addressing my comments, . Congratulations, the article has passed. —  Ssven2  Looking at you, kid 11:24, 5 April 2018 (UTC)