Talk:Let Love Lead the Way/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Grk1011 (talk · contribs) 14:15, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

I will review this for you! Grk1011 (talk) 14:15, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox is good
 * "The track was released on 23 October 2000 in the United Kingdom by Virgin Records as the lead single from Forever, as a double A-side single with "Holler". Incorporate the double A-side in a different way. It's a bit tacked on/run-on
 * "which some critics believed it was" -> remove it
 * Last sentence of first para add what's in italics: "Group member Melanie..."
 * Scotland is part of the UK, so it's odd to refer to it as "internationally" here
 * add a colon after "on two of their concert tours"

Background and release

 * Instead of "the former", mention him by name "Darkchild"
 * Add/repeat the relevant inline citation after Darkchild's quote
 * Remove the wikilink on Melanie Chisholm. Is it appropriate to instead refer to her as Mel C? Isn't that more recognizable?
 * I had this same doubt when writing this article. I've changed to her stage name Melanie C for this and other occurrences throughout the article Alex reach me! 14:24, 12 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "however, months later, a representative for the group stated that the first single had not been chosen yet." <- it doesn't feel necessary to mention that someone may have been misinformed or wasn't prepared to talk about it, especially since what was previously said was true. I think you're trying to say that both were lead singles since it was a double-A?
 * Sentence removed Alex reach me! 14:24, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

Composition

 * Everything in the first paragraph is ref 18, so you just the one in-line citation at the end of the paragraph.

Critical reception

 * The article for Sputnikmusic was just deleted and as part of that process, editors pointed out that it may not have a reputable site. Suggest removing.

Commercial performance

 * "during the first day on sale" -? during its first day on sale
 * "selling" -> having sold
 * "on its first week" -> during its first week
 * The NME ref (#40) clarifies that it is in fact a UK record. That wasn't obvious before. You should clarify this.
 * General comment about "Chisholm" again instead of the more recognizable Melanie C or Mel C. Ignore this if that's not the typical convention, but it feels to me like a Madonna situation where you use their commonly known name not their last name.
 * The sentence beginning with "Chisholm's 11th..." <- once again, is this just UK?
 * Scotland separate from UK again?
 * Fix ref order for the 5 refs in a row.
 * "...for another week, becoming..." add and after the comma

Music video

 * "filmed within two days in summer 2000, being directed" -> change within to in, and being to and was.
 * "clip" -> use video since it's not just a snippet
 * Note to self that the synopsis does not need a ref since there is no analysis present.

Live performances

 * Add something to emphasize the time difference between performances.
 * colon before the concert tours
 * I had forgotten who Halliwell was by this point in the article. But also does that mean 4 sang or 5?
 * The four other members sang it without Halliwell, take a look if it makes more sense now. Alex reach me! 14:24, 12 August 2023 (UTC)


 * The way this is written, you shouldn't introduce the two tours by name prior to explaining them. It's so short that it feels repetitive. Instead, put a period after "their concert tours", name the first, have the three or so sentences about it followed by the intro and sentences about the other.
 * The reception of the Spice World tour appears to be about the song itself, not the tour or performance. It's almost more about legacy since it's 20 years later?
 * I've removed the two last quotes and replaced with other content Alex reach me! 14:24, 12 August 2023 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * Add Credits and personnel adapted from liner notes. with the ref at the beginning of this section

Other

 * Copyvio tool puts you at 28.6% unlikely. Just the attributed quotes. Good!
 * Images have proper licensing and are relevant
 * References to reliable sources. Check the comments I had about a few of them above.

Discussion
Not much to fix. Great article though I do find the double A-side concept a bit difficult to grasp having little exposure to it. Grk1011 (talk) 21:18, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Please take a look at my changes. Thanks for your review! Alex reach me! 14:24, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I made a couple small tweaks. Passing now! Grk1011 (talk) 13:28, 14 August 2023 (UTC)