Talk:Let Me Know (Tamar Braxton song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:28, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * and only included on the → and was only included on the record's
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Al Sherrod "A-Rod" Lambert, Tamar Braxton, → unlink Braxton here and only use her last name
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * and Harmony Samuels → you may use "while" here for a better flow
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * 1976 single "(At Your Best) You Are Love". → you may just put the year in brackets after the title here to avoid repeition
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * complimented the visuals → there was only one music video, so please don't use the plural form
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Infobox

 * All on point here
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:36, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Background and release

 * and produced → you may use "while" for a better flow
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * included of a rapper → remove the "of" as it doesn't make any sense
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Due to the experience, she chose to avoid making hip hop music → what do you mean here? Do you mean she chose to never release a hip hop song in her future career?
 * Exactly. I have revised it to make it clearer. Aoba47 (talk) 21:40, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

 * 1976 single "(At Your Best) You Are Love" → same as in the lead
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * She talks about love saying → She also talks about love, saying:
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Well-written paragraph!
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:42, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * You should link "Music criticism" in "Critical reception" first
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:45, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Again, very well-written
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:45, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Commercial performance

 * number eight also on the same day → replace "also on the same day" with simultaneously
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:46, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Music video and promotion

 * directed the accompanying music video → directed the single's accompanying music video
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * Throughout the video, Braxton → use "she" to avoid repetition
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)


 * seducing the listener → who is the listener?
 * Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Track listing

 * Flawless ;)
 * Thank you. Aoba47 (talk) 21:48, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * Fixed by myself...
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Charts

 * Fixed by myself...
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Release history

 * Flawless ;)
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Copy-violation

 * 30.1% is still acceptable!
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Media

 * Sample seems stable
 * Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 21:49, 18 December 2017 (UTC)

Outcome

 * Another well-written article from the Braxton series ! for 7 days! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:28, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your review! I believe that I have responded to everything. Aoba47 (talk) 21:50, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing this! Congrats; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:52, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Would you have time to take a look at "Hot"? Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:08, 18 December 2017 (UTC)