Talk:Let Me Reintroduce Myself/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:31, 2 January 2023 (UTC)

This will run over the course of two days --K. Peake 09:31, 2 January 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * "and the song's producer," → "and the sole producer,"
 * "to a new studio album" would it be more appropriate to write this or "to an upcoming studio album"?
 * Where is the older artist part sourced properly?
 * "and Stefani's brother" → "and Gwen's brother" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
 * Remove on the track after the instrumentation since this is implied
 * "A departure from Stefani's" → "A departure from Gwen Stefani's" because she was not the last Stefani mentioned
 * The one lyric and artwork sentence is not notable for the lead
 * "and comparing it favorably to" → "and making favorable comparisons to"
 * These three paragraphs are too small on their own, so merge the lead into two paras
 * "An accompanying music video to the song was" → "An accompanying music video was" with the wikilink
 * Remove the introduction to Philip Andelman since this is not required in the lead
 * "at a music video shoot." → "at a video shoot." to avoid using the term music video twice
 * "of the song's digital release," → "of the digital release,"

Background and release

 * Stefani doubting if her fans would do the same does not seem to be the point she is making in the quote
 * The source does not say that it was a Zoom conference where they met virtually
 * Pipe The Voice to The Voice (American TV series)
 * Either pipe Me Too movement to MeToo Movement or stylize it as that instead
 * "and described it her "a way of saying I’m" → "and described it as "a way of saying I'm"
 * Img looks good!
 * Wikilink music video
 * "also drew a comparison to her "Hollaback Girl" look," → "also drew a comparison to "Hollaback Girl"," since you have already specified this is about the style
 * "It serves as her first non-festive single release" → "It served as Stefani's first non-festive single"
 * Remove comma after third studio album
 * "after the announcement of her engagement to" → "after her engagement to" because no announcement is mentioned by the source
 * Wikilink lyric video to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * Remove usage of "the" before Universal Music Group since that's not how it is stylized

Composition and lyrics

 * Img looks good!
 * The country part is not sourced, even though duets themselves are
 * Where is the Latin part sourced?
 * Wikilink as The Orange County Register instead
 * "said it was a" → "said it is a"
 * "claimed that the song helped" → "assured it helped"
 * "of Stefani’s days" → "of Stefani's days"
 * "Stefani's brother, Eric Stefani, contributes" → "Gwen's brother Eric Stefani contributes" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
 * "the song is about Stefani's" → "the song is about Gwen Stefani's" per above
 * "Ross wanted to help" → "Golan wanted to help"
 * "additionally references her 2005 single "Hollaback Girl"" → "additionally references "Hollaback Girl"" since it has already been introduced
 * "in the lyric:" → "with the lines"

Critical reception

 * "and compared it to "her days" → "and compared it to Stefani's "days"
 * ""Although it’s been a" → ""Although it's been a"
 * "Paper likened the song" → "The staff of Paper likened the song"
 * "at the right time."" → "at the right time"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * Italicise Vulture.com and wikilink to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * "to be clunky but overall" → "to be clunky, but overall"

Chart performance

 * "In the US," → "In the United States,"
 * "at number 3." → "at number three." per MOS:NUM
 * "It later reached at peak" → "The song later reached at peak"
 * Remove the ranking of the UK Singles Chart since that is not notable here
 * "It debuted at" → "The song debuted at"
 * Mention a couple or so more European airplay or digital charts per the lead

Music video

 * Wikilink music video on the img text
 * "The accompanying music video for "Let Me Reintroduce Myself" was" → "The accompanying music video was"
 * "released on January 1, 2021 to Stefani's YouTube channel." → "released to Stefani's YouTube channel on January 1, 2021."
 * Pipe Today to Today (American TV program)
 * "The video for "Let Me Reintroduce Myself" begins with" → "The video begins with"
 * Remove the comma after solo music video
 * "The "Let Me Reintroduce Myself" video then transitions" → "The scene then transitions"
 * Remove the comma after debut studio solo album
 * Remove pipe on Zoom
 * "of the song itself" and called it" → "of the song itself", and called it"
 * Wikilink Entertainment Tonight

Live performances

 * "on December 7, 2020 for a" → "on December 7, 2020, for a"
 * Remove pipe on Today
 * "Her performance on The Tonight Show was also" → "The third performance was also"

Track listing

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Charts

 * Pipe HRT to Croatian Radiotelevision

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; I would have posted my initial comments yesterday, but I did not have the time. --K. Peake 11:07, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review! I will be getting to this shortly. Carbrera (talk) 23:15, 4 January 2023 (UTC).
 * Any updates on this? --K. Peake 21:09, 20 January 2023 (UTC)
 * ❌ for this one due to the nominator's lack of activity. --K. Peake 07:04, 2 February 2023 (UTC)