Talk:Let Your Head Go/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:48, 26 August 2023 (UTC)

This will run over two days! --K. Peake 17:48, 26 August 2023 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

Infobox and lead

 * Pipe electro to Electro (music) in the infobox
 * "also serving as additional producers." → "also serving as producers." to avoid the implication they contributed additional production role
 * "In 2004, it was included on the video album" → "In 2004, the former was included on the video album,"
 * "after her record company went" → "after Beckham's record company went"
 * "It is Beckham's" → "The song is Beckham's"
 * ""Let Your Head Go" is a" → "It is a"
 * Pipe electro to Electro (music)
 * "by Beckham in the United Kingdom," → "by Beckham in the UK,"
 * Sophie Ellis Bextor → Sophie Ellis-Bextor with the wikilink

Background

 * Where is the second solo album sourced?
 * A more accurate description than describing her solo career as a failure would be rapping career/style per the source

Composition

 * "also serving as additional producers." → "also serving as producers."
 * Remove overly obvious wikilink on guitar
 * Pipe mastered to Mastering (audio)
 * Add info about the meaning of the song to the second para
 * I'm not sure what you mean here Alex reach me! 22:32, 27 August 2023 (UTC)


 * ""Let Your Head Go" is a" → "Musically, "Let Your Head Go" is a" but the last genre is not sourced
 * Pipe electro to Electro (music)
 * Wikilink Racked per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * "and vintage Cyndi Lauper."" → "and vintage Cyndi Lauper"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "just a few years prior."" → "just a few years prior"." per above
 * "feel, boasting "boasted a tune" → "feel and "boasted a tune"

Reception

 * Sophie Ellis Bextor → Sophie Ellis-Bextor on the img text with the wikilink
 * "received positive reviews from" → "was met with positive reviews from"
 * "Andy White, the song is" → "White, the song is" per his full name already having been used (The Independent is sufficient to identify which person of this surname he is)
 * "For Jon O'Brien of" → "For O'Brien of"
 * "Justin Myers from the Official Charts Company" → "Myers from the Official Charts Company"
 * Use the staff of introduction for Hollywood.com
 * "of her vocal proficiency."" → "of her vocal proficiency"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "In the United Kingdom," → "In the UK,"
 * "with Sophie Ellis Bextor's" → "with Sophie Ellis-Bextor's" with the wikilink
 * Pipe Eurochart Hot 100 Singles to European Hot 100 Singles

Music video

 * Pipe wire hanger to Clothes hanger
 * "She wakes from" → "Beckham wakes from"
 * "She walks between" → "Beckham walks between"
 * MOS:QUOTE issues in the last para and repeated instances of full names when these have already been used

Track listings

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Use so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Charts

 * Wouldn't it be better to list the entries as "Let Your Head Go/This Groove"?

Weekly charts

 * Pipe Romanian Top 100 to Romanian record charts

Year-end charts

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; this went as expected! --K. Peake 20:45, 27 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for another amazing review! See my comment above. Alex reach me! 22:32, 27 August 2023 (UTC)
 * By meaning of the song, I mean an analysis of sorts for the lyrical meaning please. K. Peake 07:26, 28 August 2023 (UTC)
 * I'm afraid there's no info on this other than the David Sinclair book one. Alex reach me! 03:23, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Is there any updates for this review? Is there more things to be sorted, or are we done? — VAUGHAN J.  ( TALK ) 01:00, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I did some copy editing for you but this is ready to go! --K. Peake 06:46, 26 October 2023 (UTC)