Talk:Lever House/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Move the short description to the top of the article.
 * Also move the "use mdy dates" template below "about".
 * You can also change "about" for the "for" template.
 * The only issue with that is I am combining two "for" templates, which is the only reason I'm using "about". Epicgenius (talk) 19:52, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Infobox, lead, and #Site all look good.
 * "company which was" "company that was"
 * "an area which was" "an area that was"
 * "window panes which cannot open" "window panes that cannot open"
 * "window washers was hired" "window washers were hired"
 * "the third story was" "the third story were"
 * "during April 1951" "in April 1957"
 * Capitalize "Mayor" when listing a title/name.
 * "designation. since" "designation. Since"
 * "one of very similar design" - reword?
 * Remove the comma after "identical to the originals".
 * "during late 2009" "in late 2009"
 * "without regard to existing architecture" "without regard to the existing architecture"
 * Check for citation ordering issues everywhere in the article.
 * I wouldn't suggest listing PAPER in all caps. Change it to Paper.
 * Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark references from The Real Deal New York with "|url-access=subscription".
 * Wikilink David W. Dunlap, Aline B. Saarinen ("Louchheim"), Ada Louise Huxtable, Herbert Muschamp, Grace Glueck, Paul Goldberger, Christopher Gray, and Sam Sifton.

Progress

 * Thanks. I've done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 19:59, 2 July 2021 (UTC)