Talk:Li Yi Bar

Grammar/wording
Does anyone else feel like this article needs a massive rewrite/polishing in terms of the way it's worded? It comes off as if it was written by a non-native English speaker, but I wouldn't even know how to start to approach fixing this page since I'm not familiar enough with the material. TubePowered (talk) 05:17, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
 * The article was mainly written by me. Indeed, I am a non-native English speaker. What do you think is inappropriate? --Yejianfei (talk) 22:38, 31 January 2022 (UTC)