Talk:Liddle Kiddles

One of the identified issues on the article is the tone or style perhaps not reflecting the encyclopedic tone used on Wikipedia. I found this to be evident in the line, "When the "chatty-ring" was pulled one of 8 different phrases could be heard, such as "This is where the Liddle Kiddles live!"". The word 'chatty-ring' can be considered jargon as it is terminology that is specific to the 'Kiddles'toy and more significantly, the jargon has not been explained, hence there is obscurity of meaning within this sentence which does not reflect the encyclopedic tone used on Wikipedia. Also, this article states that it needs 'additional citations for verification', hence I added an in-text citation to verify the claim; "The bigger bodies (the first ten dolls) were designed to resemble typical neighborhood children at play". Dramatic123 (talk) 00:53, 22 March 2022 (UTC)