Talk:Life Is Strange: Before the Storm/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 23:16, 19 January 2018 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * "James reveals that the woman they saw him kissing was Rachel's biological mother" - now I'm confused; so does Rachel have a non-biological mother, presumably the woman whom James is cheating on? How does Rachel not know who her biological mother is?
 * She was adopted, and this being a story twist, I don't know how to clarify other than specifying with "biological".
 * Solved the problem. Cognissonance (talk) 14:48, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
 * "the developer's proprietary StoryForge tools" - what does this mean? As in, what do StoryForge tools do?
 * I added the abstract functions of StoryForge, as going too much into detail would be redundant IMO.
 * "criticised plotholes" - can you give me an example of a plothole? I think the article could benefit from mentioning one
 * Critics avoided spoilers, so quotes like "logic holes big enough to drive Chloe's truck through" only amount to general statements.
 * "Most Touching Moment" - can you indicate what this moment was?
 * Done.
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Fantastic work on this article. Looking forward to passing it once minor issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 13:43, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much. I've responded to your concerns above. Cognissonance (talk) 14:38, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm very happy with your changes. Passing this now. Well done. Freikorp (talk) 23:32, 20 January 2018 (UTC)