Talk:Life in Color

Tone of article
Am I the only one who thinks the article tone verges on promotional. JanetteDoe (talk) 12:04, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
 * I must admit, I tried to make it neutral; it was hard to find references for this that weren't purely primary sources or blogs. ViperSnake151   Talk  20:36, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Understandable. You might check at the guild of copy editors members list for someone to ask for a once-over, but check their contributions history first to make sure they are recently active.  Link is  here.  Alternately, you might look over the edit histories of some other concert tour pages for editors who seem to do a good careful job and ask their advice.  Best.  JanetteDoe (talk) 03:34, 27 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Though Earflaps has really been doing a lot of work here lately. ViperSnake151   Talk  22:51, 8 January 2015 (UTC)

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