Talk:Light on Yoga/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 22:27, 14 October 2019 (UTC)

Opening statement
In reviews I conduct, I may make small copyedits. These will only be limited to spelling and punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. For replying to Reviewer comment, please use ✅,, , ❌, , or , followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. — ♠Vami _IV†♠  22:27, 14 October 2019 (UTC)

This was almost a Quick Pass from me, but I think there are some additions to be made to the article. They are detailed below. – ♠Vami _IV†♠  22:27, 14 October 2019 (UTC)


 * Many thanks for taking this on, and for the kind words. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:42, 15 October 2019 (UTC)

Broadness and prose

 * Could you discuss what yoga is in "Context"?
 * Somewhat like trying to define Jazz... ✅


 * What language was the book first published in? I assume English, but the article doesn't tell me.
 * Yes. ✅


 * Move The yoga scholar Mark Singleton [...] into the first paragraph of "Reception".
 * Moved and merged with his other comments. Or we can mention him both under Illustrations and under Reception, as you like. ✅


 * The yoga teacher Bernie Gourley [...] This sentence is golden as a transition from praise for the book to criticism of it.
 * Thank you.