Talk:Like a Surgeon/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 21:59, 7 September 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm MarioSoulTruthFan and I'll be reviewing the article in the next 2-3 days.

Infobox

 * Source for release date and which format? CD single, download, radio?
 * ✅ Added.


 * How do you know the genre of the song it's not mentioned anywhere, plus it needs reference.
 * ✅ Added + reference.


 * How do you know the exact day it was recorded? The article only mentions the month.
 * ✅ Removed.

Lead

 * It could use a little of the "Writing and development" section.
 * ✅ Added.


 * becoming his fifth entry overall → not anymore, some other songs have entered the Hot 100 after this one.
 * ✅ Fixed.

Writing and development

 * Yankovic sings from the point of view of a new surgeon, singing → other word instead of sings or singing.
 * ✅ Fixed.

Reception

 * Billboard would later → when?
 * ✅ Added.


 * In Australia, it peaked at number 19, similarly his second highest peak in that country → third at the moment, should be written in a way that doesn't need an update.
 * ✅ Reworded.

Promotion

 * Fine
 * ✅ Thank you.

Track listing and formats

 * Fine.
 * ✅ Thank you.

Chart

 * Fine
 * ✅ Thank you.

Overall GA review

 * You need a commercial performance section.
 * There is one... It's the second half of "Reception" Carbrera (talk) 23:50, 7 September 2016 (UTC).
 * My bad then. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:22, 8 September 2016 (UTC)


 * Add an external link with the lyrics.
 * ✅ Added.


 * Lacks a Credits and personnel section as well.
 * ✅ Added.

On hold for seven days. It is almost flawless.
 * All done! Thanks as usual. Carbrera (talk) 22:22, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I missed one thing, you should create a release history section with process and a infobox, the usual, because that release on the "writing and development" section sticks out like a sore thumb. Sorry, but the rest is just great! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:42, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Now done! Do you think you could maybe take a look at the message I left on your talk page? Thanks so much. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 22:49, 9 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Sure, sorry I totally missed it. First I will pass this article. Congratulations MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:56, 9 September 2016 (UTC)