Talk:Like a Virgin & Other Big Hits!/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 19:49, 30 August 2016 (UTC)

Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and here's my review for your GAN:

Lead

 * extended play by → extended play recorded by
 * by Sire Records → through Sire Records
 * It was part of an exclusive release in Japan, and remained unreleased in the United States until 2016, when it was re-released for Record Store Day. → It was exclusively made available for consumption in Japan, but was re-released in the United States in 2016 with the privilege of the Record Store Day
 * EP → extended play
 * included four tracks: the title track from the 1984 album of the same name, plus three singles ("Holiday", "Lucky Star", "Borderline") from her debut eponymous studio album. → includes four tracks—"Like a Virgin" from the singer's 1984 album of the same name, and "Holiday", "Lucky Star" and "Borderline" from her eponymous debut record.
 * Link "maxi singles" to its respective article on Wiki
 * Remixed by John "Jellybean" Benitez, the record's mixes were previously released on several maxi singles prior to Like a Virgin & Other Big Hits!. In its original run, the EP did not chart anywhere. However, during its limited re-release, the record was commercially successful, peaking on four different record charts, including the United States' Dance/Electronic Albums and Top Tastemaker Albums charts. → The extended play incorporated remixes done by American disc jockey John "Jellybean" Benitez, which previously made appearance on various of Madonna's maxi single releases. While the original edition of Like a Virgin & Other Big Hits! failed to reach any record chart, its 2016 re-release experienced commercial success by reaching fourBillboard' component charts, including the Dance/Electronic Albums and Top Tastemaker Albums charts

Composition and release

 * EP → extended play
 * singles, "Holiday", "Lucky Star", and "Borderline", → singles—"Holiday", "Luck Star" and "Borderline"—
 * 1983 debut → 1983 eponymous debut
 * Madonna,[1] while the title track would later → Madonna;[1] its title track was later
 * link 12" to its article on Wiki
 * The record's original release took place in Japan on October 10, 1984. The re-release of the EP occurred on April 16, 2016, as part of Record Store Day. → "Like a Virgin & Other Big Hits!" was originally made available for consumption in Japan on October 10, 1984, with a re-release of the extended play occurring on April 16, 2016 to American digital stores with the privilege of the Record Store Day.
 * vinyl,[5] and → remove comma
 * Additionally, the cover → Additionally, its artwork
 * and contains → with it containing
 * Obi strip, also identical to its original counterpart. → Obi strip as displayed on its 1984 counterpart.
 * According to the official release page on Record Store Day's website, the three remixes included on the EP were done by John "Jellybean" Benitez.[4] → you may remove this and incorporate it in the first paragraph : The record's remixes of "Borderline" and "Lucky Star" were → ... "Borderline" and "Lucky Star" done by NAME OF HIM

Commercial performance

 * did not peak on any record chart. However, when it was re-released as part of Record Store Day, the EP was moderately successful. → did not peak on any record chart, but its re-release later experienced moderate commercial success.
 * Link Billboard
 * for the week ending May 7, 2016 → add this at the end of the sentence
 * third highest → third-highest
 * The next week, the album dropped off the chart.[8] On the Top Tastemaker Albums chart, the EP debuted and peaked at number eight, but also dropped off the following week.[9] → While dropping off the chart the next week, the extended play additionally opened and peaked at number eight on the Top Tastemaker Albums chart, having a similar course.
 * In addition, the extended play also appeared on the → "Like a Virgin & Other Big Hits!" also made appearance on the
 * where it peaked → where it charted; you've already used "peaked" two times
 * reappear on the chart, at number → reentry the chart, at position; you've already used "number" several times
 * 124; along with the re-entry, Like a Virgin has spent a total of 109 weeks on the Billboard 200. → 124, bringing a total of 109 weeks on the Billboard Hot 200.

Track listing

 * You need to say that the credits were adapted from the liner notes of Like a Virgin... accompanied by the credits ref.
 * You need to add a ref of release here.
 * Unlink Madonna
 * The headline section does that to have the credits reference.

Charts

 * You may add a subsection called "Weekly charts".
 * That is not needed, we add the weekly charts section when there are multiple chart tables, to differentiate from the yearly, all-time, decade end charts etc, which is not the case here. — I B  [ Poke  ] 09:08, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Outcome

 * I've put this for 7 days. Best and good luck with editing, Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:49, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I have responded to the comments on behalf of Carbrera. :) — I B  [ Poke  ] 09:08, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing after some minor edits done. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:21, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Would you be able to review "Heaven"? I would respect this. Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:25, 1 September 2016 (UTC)