Talk:Liksom en Herdinna, högtids klädd/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 22:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Haven't done one of your articles for a good amount of time, here comes a review! --K. Peake 22:24, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for taking this on, good to hear from you again. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:23, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Thanks!
 * Keep the composition being No. 80 here but write out and source in the body, as refs are discouraged in the lead
 * Done.
 * "The Epistle is a" → "It is a" and merge this with the above para because you don't have enough content for two
 * Done.
 * Add a sentence about the composition's reception to the lead
 * Added.
 * Remove [2] from the lead because there is no direct quote here
 * Done.

Context

 * First para looks good!
 * Thanks.
 * "during the eighteenth century." → "during the 18th century." per MOS:NUM
 * Done.

Music and verse form

 * Audio sample looks good!
 * Noted.
 * Merge the first para with the second per the short length
 * Done.
 * Pipe rhyming pattern to Rhyme scheme
 * Done.
 * Pipe time to Time signature
 * Done.

Lyrics

 * Nicolas Boileau → Nicolas Boileau-Despréaux on the img text
 * Done.
 * Introduce who Nicolas Boileau-Despréaux is in prose
 * Done.
 * "Further, a horse" → "Furthermore, a horse"
 * Done.
 * "a mention of Ulla." → "a mention of Ulla Winblad." per Wiki policy on names
 * Done.
 * "But Bellman displays a" → "However, Bellman displays a"
 * Done.

Reception and legacy

 * Img looks good!
 * Thanks.
 * "Bellman's biographer, Paul Britten Austin, describes" → "Bellman's biographer Paul Britten Austin describes"
 * Done; both are correct.
 * "like a Constable painting," → "like a John Constable painting,"
 * Done.
 * "However he finds" → "However, he finds"
 * Done.
 * "crowing outside, and the bell" is the form of English used really the correct one to have a comma before and?
 * Yes.
 * "with Epistles 71, "Ulla! min Ulla!", and" → "with Epistles 71 and" because 71 has already been introduced
 * Done.
 * "and Ulla's way of" → "and Ulla Winblad's way of"
 * Done.
 * Pipe classical to Classical music
 * Done.

Final comments and verdict

 * until everything is fixed; coincidentally, you expressed gratitude around the same time I started actually reviewing! --K. Peake 09:20, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. I think I've fixed everything to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:42, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
 * All good, apart from where you forgot to change the pipes for rhyming pattern and . --K. Peake 09:46, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
 * I've done those for you. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:48, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now; I am very pleased with such a quick response! --K. Peake 09:55, 20 January 2022 (UTC)