Talk:Lillian Josephine Chester

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I like your article overall It describes her early and personal life very well. However I would consider some things. One thing I would do is maybe talk a little more about her film career or how her personal life contributed to her becoming a film maker. I would also recommend you link some of her films not just to wiki pages but other pages that have more info on them. But other then that a very good article Bjd56 (talk) 00:46, 16 November 2015 (UTC)