Talk:Lina Leandersson/GA1

GA Review
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Here's my comments/questions:
 * Unlink the date in the lead.
 * Done for the DOB, the other one links to 2008 in film. Should I unlink that as well?
 * No, links like that can be used.


 * Could you expand the lead a little? Maybe with some information from "Early life and career" and "Personal life".
 * Yeah, I have tried to do that.


 * attending drama courses, street- and jazz dance – Shouldn't this say something like "attending drama courses, and performing street- and jazz dance"?
 * Yeah, you're right. I think that's more or less been there since I created the article.
 * Ref 1 and 4 needs to be merged because they are the same article.
 * Actually, ref 1 was a link to an "Infobox" of sorts, that appeared next to the main article. I used that as a source for the place of birth. Unfortunately the link is dead now. I'll try to work it out.
 * Yeah, but that infobox is included in ref 4 so you might as well replace ref 1 with that. :)
 * Ah, the infobox has been upgraded since I last looked at it. Merged references.


 * One of her first roles was an amateur theatre performance as the mother of a spoiled girl wanting new jeans.
 * Done, changed to "... was 'in an amateur theatre performance as ..."


 * Nickelodeon's programledarskola is a television show so it should be italicized.
 * Yeah.


 * Unlink "October 2006"
 * Check.


 * "-40°C" – Use  instead of a hyphen.
 * Hmm, I wasn't able to figure out how. Are you sure about this, by the way? Celsius and Kelvin seem to use a regular dash.
 * Fixed it for you.
 * Thanks!


 * Leandersson has received several awards, and is currently nominated for a Saturn Award for "Best Performance By a Younger Actor", and a Constellation Award for "Best Female Performance in a 2008 Science Fiction Film". – This is a bit unnecessary as it is already mentioned in the Awards section. I think it's best to remove it.
 * How strongly do you feel about this? :) I'm not a fan of the idea that tables and infoboxes effectively replace the prose. I looked at some other actor-bios before adding this, and they seem to briefly mention a few rewards received (e.g Emma Watson). But I'm definitely not "married" to it.
 * OK, it can stay, but can you add references to the paragraph?
 * Done and done.


 * In "Personal life", add a link to Falun.
 * Done.


 *  She Leandersson has always liked to dance
 * Right.


 * The three paragraphs in the "Personal life" section are a bit small. I think it would be better if you merged them into one paragraph.
 * Yeah, I agree, but it depends. On my 24" monitor they look small, on my 17" they look ok. Done.

Bra jobbat med artikeln! ;) I will put it on hold for seven days so that you can fix the things above.  The Le ft orium  18:03, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Tack så jättemycket! I have addressed everything, but maybe not to your liking :) Thanks again, I really appreciate your swift response. decltype (talk) 18:56, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Everything looks good so I will pass the article. Congrats!  The Le ft orium  19:45, 11 June 2009 (UTC)