Talk:Lincoln Park Conservatory

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I mainly obsess about grammar and word use, not the content of articles. Yours is good. I changed a few things like "through" instead of "thru." There was a reference to entryways that needed to be possessive. I assumed that the reference was supposed to be to a singular entrance (entryway's), but if there were changes made to several entrances, then that needs to be changed to the plural possessive (entryways').

There were a few places where numbers were alternately written out or expressed in Arabic format, so I standardized that. In the opening paragraph, I think it reads better to give the detail about the exact location of the site and then follow up with the surrounding points of interest, so I switched those two sentences. The only other thing I changed, I think, was eliminating "city of" before Chicago and "in the U.S. state of" before Illinois. I think Chicago is a famous enough city worldwide that the standard Chicago, Illinois is fine, especially with the hyperlinks.

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