Talk:Linda Matar

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The introduction paragraph could use a little more information to introduce Linda Matar and inform the reader more. The facts that you give seem to be important and accurate which is good. Also, there is no bias in any of the information. I would suggest adding some sort of visual such as a picture if available or an informational chart. In the Adult Life section you could move some information about her career there to make it longer if there is no other information available. I did not notice any grammar mistakes or any major issues. Overall, the article looks good and should be useful to the Wikipedia website. Amyers311 (talk) 18:07, 23 October 2019 (UTC)

Your introduction paragraph is solid, but you could try to put more main topics of what you will be discussing in your body paragraphs. Your introductory sentence, however, clearly states the article topic accurately and in one sentence. Your tone when writing this article is unbiased and the information that you give fully explains the makeup of Linda Matar. Your organization is easy to read, but you may want to split up the "work" paragraph into smaller sections to make the paragraph smaller and similar to the biography paragraph. You could also add a picture of her if you want to display a visual. Your citations and sources are accurate, but you could always add more links to link to other Wikipedia articles. Overall, the article is straightforward and easy to read which is how a Wikipedia article should look. Kmechley2 (talk) 21:14, 2 December 2019 (UTC)

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Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 17:29, 18 January 2022 (UTC)