Talk:Linda Syddick Napaltjarri/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Mephiston999 (talk) 22:58, 1 March 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Lead

 * The lead does not summarize the entire article adequately. Please expand it and make sure that all the main aspects of the article are present in the lead.
 * Can an appropriate infobox be found, I'm sure you can find an infobox for an artist.

Life

 * ✅ Decrease size of image.

Background

 * ✅ Link acrylic paints
 * ✅ men of central Australia to women painting ..... men of central Australia towards women painting
 * ✅ and in the 1990s large numbers of them ..... and in the 1990s a large number of them

Career

 * ✅ when works by her were hung in a private gallery ... when her works were hung in a private gallery.
 * ✅ Disambiguation of Dreaming.

Miscellaneous

 * It would be great to add a picture of her or of one of her works.
 * ✅ Persondata must be added, see WP:PDATA for more info.
 * Be consistent with dates format in the reference section.

Overall a good article, just a few issues to address and I shall pass it. Mephiston999 (talk) 23:38, 1 March 2010 (UTC)