Talk:Lipstick Building/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Bruxton (talk · contribs) 01:10, 5 March 2024 (UTC)

Looking forward to reviewing another of your interesting articles Bruxton (talk) 01:10, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
 * thanks for the review. I've responded to everything you raised below. Epicgenius (talk) 16:20, 5 March 2024 (UTC)

Lead

 * I do not see skyscraper mentioned in the body
 * I removed it. In NYC a building of this height isn't considered a skyscraper, but it might be considered a skyscraper in other cities. Epicgenius (talk) 16:20, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
 * I do not see "The building stands on a double-height column at the base"
 * Fixed. Epicgenius (talk) 16:20, 5 March 2024 (UTC)

Grammar

 * 1) Is "Sterling Equites" spelled right?
 * Nope, I fixed that. Epicgenius (talk) 16:20, 5 March 2024 (UTC)


 * 1) "A cafe had opened within the building's lobby" Had is probably not needed
 * Fixed. Epicgenius (talk) 16:20, 5 March 2024 (UTC)

Images

 * 3 images in the article are all licensed properly and free

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